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Bent on exploiting him and his fire and wind Elemental abilities But Felix's world is about to change because he is Findo Unum the Split One and his coming has been foretold for generations Though Felix's arrival brings great joy to the Elemental world it also heralds a coming darkness No one knows this better than Seven Se. Let s Compartmentalize DNF d at 64%I want to start this off by saying that I respect what TJ Klune tried to accomplish with this book If nothing else Burn is an ambitious storyHaving said that this book really made me uestion whether an author s level of talent as a whole can be separated from a singular book that they ve written I think that overall talent can definitely be separated from just one book written by that authorAn author who is very talented can miss the mark and put out a book that is not well written and that just doesn t workThis is only TJ Klune s second book so I can t say whether or not I think he is a good writer I can say that in my opinion with this book Klune has put something out there that just doesn t workGood writing is the sum of many parts A good idea a well executed plot character development and proseRe The ideaThe kernel of an idea from which Burn grew is absolutely wonderful I loved the concept of a tree that gave birth to the Elements who in turn created the world I can honestly say that I have not seen anything like that in the MM genre Klune gets points for coming up with something freshRe The PlotI m very torn over what I think of this book s plot It had alot of potential and I could see the journey that Klune was trying to take the reader onUnfortunately the plot never reaches its full potential It s bogged down by the romance which pops up at awkward moments The execution of the plot is clumsy and it stumbles along like a baby who s just learning to walk You think the baby has hit its stride and then it veers off runs into a coffee table and ends up sprawled out on the floorI winced every time the plot got derailed with a poorly placed make out session or a long scene where the dominant male character goes caveman possessive on the submissive character It was painful to see the author get distracted from what it seemed like he was trying to accomplishRe Character DevelopmentThe main characters in the book were a disappointment most of all Felix Felix was a very flat and unremarkable first person narrator He swung between cliche snarkiness and being annoyingly passive The book takes a big hit due to the fact that Felix was a poorly developed character It s very hard to successfully write a book in first person It s so so important that the author creates a main character that is riveting a character whose head you want to be in for the duration of the book Felix was just not that kind of characterSeven was a man who was supposed to be the ultimate protector the ultimate alpha male He fell short Was he possessive Yes Was he bossy Yes The problem was that in order for me to believe a character is a take charge and dominate kind of guy I have to feel like the man has an inner strength Simply having Seven order Felix around and panic when Felix is not near him does not convince me that Seven is someone who inspires loyalty and obedience Because Seven and Felix were so flat I couldn t become emotionally invested in them or their relationshipRe The ProseThis book was overwritten Good prose prose that has an impact is economical Using as many ten cent words as you can does not automatically make your book a work of art Anybody can have ideas the difficulty is to express them without suandering a uire of paper on an idea that ought to be reduced to one glittering paragraph Mark Twain I can t say it any better than Mark TwainAt 64% this book had exhausted me and the bottom line was that I wasn t enjoying it Will TJ Klune improve as time goes by I think he will I hope he will but this book standing on its own was just not a successful effort Planet of the Bugs uestion whether an author s level of talent as a whole can be separated from a singular book that they ve written I think that overall talent can definitely be separated from just one book written by that authorAn author who is very talented can miss the mark and put out a book that is not well written and that just doesn t workThis is only TJ Klune s second book so I can t say whether or not I think he is a good writer I can say that in my opinion with this book Klune has put something out there that just doesn t workGood writing is the sum of many parts A good idea a well executed plot character development and proseRe The ideaThe kernel of an idea from which Burn grew is absolutely wonderful I loved the concept of a tree that gave birth to the Elements who in turn created the world I can honestly say that I have not seen anything like that in the MM genre Klune gets points for coming Fishes of the Open Ocean up with something freshRe The PlotI m very torn over what I think of this book s plot It had alot of potential and I could see the journey that Klune was trying to take the reader onUnfortunately the plot never reaches its full potential It s bogged down by the romance which pops Out of Bounds (Boundaries, up at awkward moments The execution of the plot is clumsy and it stumbles along like a baby who s just learning to walk You think the baby has hit its stride and then it veers off runs into a coffee table and ends Grass, Sky, Song up sprawled out on the floorI winced every time the plot got derailed with a poorly placed make out session or a long scene where the dominant male character goes caveman possessive on the submissive character It was painful to see the author get distracted from what it seemed like he was trying to accomplishRe Character DevelopmentThe main characters in the book were a disappointment most of all Felix Felix was a very flat and Otter Chaos! (Otter Chaos unremarkable first person narrator He swung between cliche snarkiness and being annoyingly passive The book takes a big hit due to the fact that Felix was a poorly developed character It s very hard to successfully write a book in first person It s so so important that the author creates a main character that is riveting a character whose head you want to be in for the duration of the book Felix was just not that kind of characterSeven was a man who was supposed to be the The Illusionists ultimate protector the O Último Testamento (Maggie Costello, ultimate alpha male He fell short Was he possessive Yes Was he bossy Yes The problem was that in order for me to believe a character is a take charge and dominate kind of guy I have to feel like the man has an inner strength Simply having Seven order Felix around and panic when Felix is not near him does not convince me that Seven is someone who inspires loyalty and obedience Because Seven and Felix were so flat I couldn t become emotionally invested in them or their relationshipRe The ProseThis book was overwritten Good prose prose that has an impact is economical Using as many ten cent words as you can does not automatically make your book a work of art Anybody can have ideas the difficulty is to express them without suandering a One for My Baby uire of paper on an idea that ought to be reduced to one glittering paragraph Mark Twain I can t say it any better than Mark TwainAt 64% this book had exhausted me and the bottom line was that I wasn t enjoying it Will TJ Klune improve as time goes by I think he will I hope he will but this book standing on its own was just not a successful effort

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Burn Elementally Evolved #1

Ven the mysterious man who rescued Felix from that horrible fire years ago and then disappeared; Seven who has returned to claim what's rightfully his Felix's heart But even as Felix begins to trust Seven and his feelings about his place in the world the darkness reveals itself bringing conseuences no one could have predict. After having this book sitting on my currently reading shelf for 2 months I am finally DNF ing it with only 7% left The author gave away a huge spoiler in the last third of the book which I really did not need or want The ending is predictable as it is given it s the first book in the series I skimmed through the last pages and yep there it was Just the way I pictured it This story got away from the author Words overtook the plot The characters rebelled and did whatever the heck they wanted defying logic and common sense especially when all was going to hell and everyone needed to run and save their lives NO They stood glued to the most dangerous spot staring in each others eyes holding hands sucking face humping each other professing all kinds of love or just being stand up comedians cause that works like a charm on bad guys they die from laughterIn a few places the book got very Mary Calmes ish and not in a good wayOK I ve already spent enough time on this neverending book I don t want to continue the agony of writing a long review about it One star

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Set in a world that closely resembles our own Burn is a story of redemption and betrayal of family and sacrifice which leads to the greatest uestion of all how far would you go to save the ones you love Fifteen years ago Felix Paracel killed his mother with fire that shot from his hands Since then he has hidden from forces. PROJECT LET RANDOMORG CHOOSE MY BOOK FROM ALL THE BOOKS I OWN AND READ IT REGARDLESS OF IF I WANT TO OR NOT Book 6MY BRAIN IS FRIEDI don t know if this book is a 5 or a 5 rating Like I m hella confused about my feelings On one had it s TJ Klune and you know his ass is masterful and on the other hand it was uite an exuisite amount of fuckery and I am shookethJongShookThe Rundown Felix is an Elemental which means he s got elemental powers He s uite uniue because he can control two elements instead of the normal one which means he s damn close to calling Captain Planet he s also got heart so he s very fucking close with all your powers combined I am Captain Planet Him and his dad have been hiding because while Elemementals are known to the World they aren t exactly liked Cue a few years ago where he burnt his mom to a crisp and got saved by a big ass dude who he didn t want to lose so he bones dude now that he s older that has the same build as the guy that saved him Well said guy is back his name is Seven he s a gigantic possessive asshole and they are destined to be together Shit gets real when the humans are like let s round up the freaks Felix being the freakiest of all and then some other bullshit about fighting the dark side because there can be only one and these aren t the droids you re looking for It gets crazy my head damn nearly exploded and I just really can tThings I liked Seven He s a possessive asshole but I dig that shit What elsethey might be able to call Captian Planet Things I didn t like Felix He s incredibly annoying don t know up from down and he s just childish The story at times felt too try hard Like too hard trying to be funny too hard trying to be sexy too hard trying to be plotty It s fucking wordy and I hate it may be love it I don t knowSo with all honesty I say this where the fuck is book 2 Like is their going to be a 3some with twins like what are you doing to me TJ Klune do I love this book or do I hate it EARTH FIRE WIND WATER HEART WITH ALL THESE POWERS COMBINED


10 thoughts on “Burn Elementally Evolved #1

  1. says:

    Alright excuse me for a moment as I geek out and at several points mention Joss Whedon and cultural references in this review I won’t be able to really discuss the plot or use direct uotes much because almost everything would be spoilerishLet me first say that I loved this book People expecting a straightforward science fiction book or a romance won’t get that in this book What they will get are elements of adventure horror romance sc

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    PROJECT LET RANDOMORG CHOOSE MY BOOK FROM ALL THE BOOKS I OWN AND READ IT REGARDLESS OF IF I WANT TO OR NOT Book 6MY BRAIN IS FRIEDI don’t know if this book is a 5 or a 5 rating Like I’m hella confused about my feelings On one had it’s TJ Klune and you know his ass is masterful and on the other hand it was uite an exuisite

  3. says:

    “My name is Felix Paracel and when I was nine I became angry with my mother and killed her with fire that shot from my hands”There are perhaps 5000 elementals in the United States Fire earth air water – elementals have

  4. says:

    2018 TJ has confirmed that there will be no seuel to this storyhe just doesn't have the time and it didn't sell as well as others he's written 😲 To say I was gutted when I heard the news was a HUGE understatement 😢HELLS BELLS TJ I’m very upsetYou’ve broken my heart Why did you do that to Seven?He’s

  5. says:

    I stayed up until 600 AM two days in a row reading Burn and being its bitch I regret nothing THE PLOTThe world set was fantastic I got vibes from other stories tho Like Terra City reminded me a bit of Gotham City And the Elementals were kind of like the X Men with the whole Government creating list census for them and such But still I'd dare to say this story had one of the most uniue plots I have ever read

  6. says:

    Let's Compartmentalize DNF'd at 64%I want to start this off by saying that I respect what TJ Klune tried to accomplish with this book If nothing else Burn is an ambitious storyHaving said that this book really made me uestion wheth

  7. says:

    I wont be able to read this because the writing would drive me insane Long flash backs and extreme repetitiveness just being some of the issues Sometimes a lot of the time “less is ” so show a story instead of rambling through pointless and wordy details trying to tell one image error

  8. says:

    After having this book sitting on my currently reading shelf for 2 months I am finally DNF ing it with only 7% left The author gave away a huge spoiler in the last third of the book which I really did not need or want The ending is predictable as it is given it's the first book in the series I skimmed through the last pages and yep there it

  9. says:

    About 45 stars After reading many other reader's reviews this book appears to be like black licorice you love it or you hate it I personally detest black licorice but I loved this book and found it interesting that there were a few DNFs out

  10. says:

    It took me a long time to come up with a review for this book Not because I didn’t like it but because I loved it and there is just somuch in this book I literally think I could write pages of analysis but will try to hit the high points I would be hard pressed to label this book as any one type of book It was fantasy it was romance it was horrorit was one hell of a ride This didn’t just end up being a story about Felix “the Split One

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